[Daily] "Just let that passion flow like a mighty river."

2023.10.18 (수)

 

• 1. Before expressions
• 2. After expressions

 

 

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 What happened today?

 

 

 

1. Before expressions

 

It's the first day to see Professor Yu from Purdue University. He did today's course by absence of the original professor. The lecture's contents were so interesting. It's about the engineering infrastructure and political infrastructure. I didn't think about the latter that affects to people's lives. And I thought the infrastructure is only involved in construction. But it's not just stuck in one section but several sections to associate with people's lives. I had a good time to think about that.

 

And I want to talk to myself one message for my full-mind. Don't upset about small things. You have a big dream and responsibility to make better life. The life is yours and a lot of other people's. Just flow that emotion to your big river.

 

 

 

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2. After expressions

 

Correct this sentences.

It's the first day I met Professor Yu from Purdue University. He conducted today's class in the absence of the original professor. The lecture's contents were so interesting, focusing on engineering infrastructure and political infrastructure. I hadn't previously considered how the latter affects people's lives. I used to think that infrastructure was only related to construction, but it extends across various sectors that impact people's lives. I had a great time contemplating this.

I'd like to leave a message to myself for a clear mindset: 'Don't get upset over trivial matters. You have big dreams and the responsibility to create a better life. Your life impacts not only yourself but also many others. Just let that passion flow like a mighty river.

 

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Can you make this sentence sound more natural and more like American-style writing?

 

It was my first day meeting Professor Yu from Purdue University. He led today's class in place of the regular professor. The lecture was incredibly engaging, delving into the realms of engineering and political infrastructure. I hadn't previously considered how the latter profoundly influences people's lives. I used to think of infrastructure solely in terms of construction, but it spans across multiple sectors that shape our daily existence. I thoroughly enjoyed pondering this perspective.

I'd like to leave a message to myself to maintain a clear mindset: 'Don't sweat the small stuff. You've got big dreams and the responsibility to create a better life, impacting not only yourself but also countless others. Allow that passion to flow like a mighty river.

 

 

 

 

 

Today was my first meeting with Professor Yu from Purdue University. He filled in for the regular professor, and the lecture was truly fascination, delving into engineering infrastructure and political infrastructure. It made me realize how much the latter affects people's lives. I used to associate infrastructure only with construction, but it spans various sectors..

 

 

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