[Daily] "In the end, I spent 5 hours working on it."

2023.10.19 (목)

 

• 1. Before expressions
• 2. After expressions

 

 

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 What happened today?

 

 

 

1. Before expressions

 

In the morning, It's raining outside. It sounded like heavy rain so I was concerned about raining at the time going to school. However, there was no rain today!

After today's class, I took a study group for writing the experiment report of soil mechanics. It's little bit hard to find the numbers of shear stress, vertical strain,and horizontal strain as same time. I found it by stopping and restarting these videos at the same moment. Finally, I did it for 5 hours.

 

 

 

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2. After expressions

 

Correct this sentences.

In the morning, it was raining heavily outside, so I was concerned about having to go to school in the rain. However, it turned out that there was no rain today!

After today's class, I led a study group to work on writing the experiment report for soil mechanics. It was a bit challenging to obtain the values for shear stress, vertical strain, and horizontal strain all at once. I managed to find these values by pausing and resuming the videos simultaneously. In the end, I spent 5 hours working on it.

 

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Can you make this sentence sound more natural and more like American-style writing?

 

In the morning, there was a heavy downpour, and I worried about heading to school in the rain. To my surprise, it didn't rain at all today!

After class, I joined a study group to tackle our soil mechanics experiment report. It was quite a challenge to extract the values for shear stress, vertical strain, and horizontal strain all at once. I figured it out by pausing and restarting the videos simultaneously. Ultimately, I devoted a solid 5 hours to this task.

 

 

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