[Daily] "cherishing quality time together."

2023.10.03 (화)

 

• 1. Before expressions
• 2. After expressions

 

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 What happened today?

 

 

 

1. Before expressions

 

It was Chuseok, the traditional Korean 명절. We, my family, had been Jeju island for 4 days last week. It was a great time to take a rest and be with my family. My parents were more elated than me. So, really happy! And today is the last holiday this month. In the morning, I had met the guy who is the military 동기. We had been sauna. There were so many things to do like a health gym, a study room, etc. 

I enjoyed all of them and talked with each other that time. He had lots of good plans to want to achieve his goals. If I had the things like that, I also hope to do as same as them.

 

 

 

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2. After expressions

 

Corret this sentences.

It was Chuseok, the traditional Korean holiday. My family and I had been on Jeju island for 4 days last week. It was a great time to take a rest and be with spend time with my family. My parents were even more elated than me I was. So, I was really happy! And today is the last holiday of this month. In the morning, I had met a guy who is the military comrade. We had been went to the sauna. There were so many things to do like ,such as a health gym, a study room. 

 

I enjoyed all of them and had a conversation talked with him each other that time. He had lots of good plans to want to achieve his goals. If I had the things like that, I also hope to do as the same as him.

 

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Can you make this sentence sound more natural and more like American-style writing?

 

 

It was Chuseok, a traditional Korean holiday. Last week, my family and I spent four wonderful days on Jeju Island, taking a break and cherishing quality time together. My parents were even more thrilled than I was; I was genuinely happy! Today marks the last holiday of this month. In the morning, I met up with a friend from the military, and we decided to hit the sauna, which had a variety of facilities like a gym and a study room.

I thoroughly enjoyed all the amenities and had a great chat with my friend. He had some fantastic plans for achieving his goals, and it got me thinking that I'd like to pursue similar aspirations.

 

 

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총정리

궁금했던 점

What's 명절 in English?

The Korean word "명절" can be translated to English as "traditional holiday".

 

 

taking a break and cherishing quality time together.

(쉬고, 함께 보내는 특별한 시간을 소중히 여기다.)

 I met up with a friend from the military

(군대 동기를 만났다.)

I thoroughly enjoyed all the amenities and had a great chat with my friend. 

(나는 완전히 즐겼고 친구랑 좋은 대화도 나눴다.)