2023.10.14 (토)
What happened today?
1. Before expressions
Today was a day to rest and play a game. There were things I should do but I need one day to loose my tension about my life. Anyway, my parents went to the suburb and my sister was also going to meet her friend. I just chilled in my room doing homework, watching netflix, and playing LOL. I love like that peaceful days too.
2. After expressions
Correct this sentences.
Today was a day to rest and play a game. There were things I should do, but I needed one day to loosen my tension about my life.
Anyway, my parents went to the suburb, and my sister was also going to meet her friend. I just chilled in my room, doing homework, watching Netflix, and playing League of Legends (LoL). I love peaceful days like that too.
Can you make this sentence sound more natural and more like American-style writing?
Today was a day to relax and enjoy a game. There were things I should have done, but I needed a day to unwind and ease the tension in my life.
Anyway, my parents headed out to the suburbs, and my sister was off to meet her friend. I just kicked back in my room, working on homework, watching Netflix, and playing League of Legends (LoL). I really cherish those peaceful days.
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