[Daily] "which, I believe, will pave the way for my success."
2023.10.21 (토)
What happened today?
1. Before expressions
I got up at 8 am. I didn't have the morning routine. So the wake up time is not as same as usual. Today, I got a solution of this problem I have.
I headed to school to take a special lesson about start-up. I was late but they made me to be able to enter the room. And the teacher Hwang started the lesson. It was the start-up lesson but it's more like the philosophy course. But I love philosophy and thinking about life! So the course was amazing to learn about the sight I have to get. I'll learn about the religion in the world. I hope to get the insight to make things genuinely. If I do anything with sincerity and true heart, I would do the best in the world.
2. After expressions
Correct this sentences.
I got up at 8 am. I didn't follow my usual morning routine. So, my wake-up time was not the same as usual. Today, I found a solution to a problem I've been having.
I went to school for a special lesson on start-ups. I was running late, but they allowed me to enter the room. Teacher Hwang started the lesson. Although it was a start-up lesson, it felt more like a philosophy course. However, I love philosophy and contemplating life, so the course was amazing for gaining a new perspective. I'm looking forward to learning about religions around the world. I hope to gain insights that will help me approach things with sincerity and a true heart, which I believe will enable me to excel in whatever I do.
Can you make this sentence sound more natural and more like American-style writing?
I woke up at 8 am, but today was different from my usual mornings. I didn't stick to my regular routine. However, this change in my schedule led to a surprising discovery.
I headed to school for a special start-up lesson. I was running late, but they graciously allowed me to enter the classroom. Teacher Hwang kicked off the session. Interestingly, even though it was supposed to be about start-ups, it felt more like a philosophy class. Fortunately, I have a deep appreciation for philosophy and pondering life's mysteries, so I found the class incredibly intriguing. I'm eagerly anticipating our upcoming discussions about world religions. My hope is to gain insights that will help me approach life and my endeavors with sincerity and a genuine heart, which, I believe, will pave the way for my success.