[Daily] "Today was a day off for me."
2023.10.12 (목)
What happened today?
1. Before expressions
Today is a free day.
The today's class was substituted for an experiment that calls the direct shear test.
After that, I returned home quickly and got some rest.
And I wrote something to put in the 자기소개서 later to get a new job.
It was really good time to remind my past experiences which I had at high school, military service,and with my family.
After the graduate, I hope to remind the experience from the university too!
2. After expressions
Correct this sentences.
Today is a free day.
The class scheduled for today was substituted for an experiment called the direct shear test.
After that, I returned home quickly and rested for a while.
I also took some time to write something that I can include in my self-introduction letter for a potential new job.
It was a great opportunity to reflect on my past experiences, such as those from high school, my time in the military, and moments with my family.
I'm looking forward to adding my university experiences to this reflection after I graduate!
Can you make this sentence sound more natural and more like American-style writing?
Today was a day off for me.
The class originally scheduled for today was replaced by a direct shear test experiment.
After that, I quickly returned home and took some time to relax.
I also used this opportunity to draft a self-introduction letter for potential job applications.
It was a valuable chance to reminisce about my past experiences, including my time in high school, the military, and moments with my family.
Looking ahead, I'm eager to include my university experiences in this reflection after I graduate!