[Daily] "Today is South Korean Armed Forces Day."
2023.09.26 (화)
What happened today?
1. Before expressions
Today is 국군의 날. My uncle did the parade in a tank. They were so nice. And today, I took a class of understaning of photography art. The professor got our class late over time 20 minutes. It's rainy and the cars were too much today at the street! She sent us the message that she would be late and so sorry for that. And after the class, she did feedback to us with the photo we had taken last days. There are so many interesting photos!
Can you make this sentence sound more natural and more like American-style writing?
2. After expressions
Today is South Korean Armed Forces Day. My uncle participated in the parade with a tank, and it was truly impressive. On a different note, I attended a photography art class today. The professor arrived 20 minutes late due to heavy traffic caused by the rain and an unusually high number of cars on the road. She sent us a message apologizing for the delay.
After the class, she provided feedback on the photos we had taken in the past few days. There were a plethora of fascinating images to review!
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궁금했던 점
What's plethora?
"Plethora" is a word that means an excessive or abundant amount of something. It's often used to describe a large quantity or a vast number of things.
Today is South Korean Armed Forces Day.
(오늘은 국군의 날이다.)
The professor arrived 20 minutes late due to heavy traffic caused by the rain
(교수님은 비가 와서 차가 막히는 바람에 20분 정도 늦었다.)
she provided feedback on the photos we had taken in the past few days.
(그녀는 예전에 찍은 사진들에 피드백을 해줬다.)
There were a plethora of fascinating images to review!
(거기엔 흥미로운 사진들이 많았다!)