[Daily] "I'd prefer to live closer to my school"
2023.10.13 (금)
What happened today?
1. Before expressions
I think it's too long the length from my home to my school. I want to live near my school but it's too expensive to live alone there. Actually I'm not working to earn money now and it's more comfortable at home.
Anyway, I had watched some videos about cleaning and organizing the stuffs in the house. I was supposed to watch them in order to learn English and how to clean my room. It's really interesting after seeing the room cleaned.
2. After expressions
Correct this sentences.
I believe the commute from my home to my school is quite lengthy. I'd prefer to live closer to my school, but the cost of living alone in that area is prohibitive. Currently, I'm not working to earn money, and it's more comfortable for me to stay at home.
Nevertheless, I've been watching some videos on cleaning and organizing household items. I initially started watching them to improve my English and learn how to clean my room. It's genuinely fascinating to see the transformation after a room has been cleaned.
Can you make this sentence sound more natural and more like American-style writing?
I think my daily commute from home to school is pretty long. I'd love to live closer to school, but the cost of living on my own in that area is just too high. Right now, I'm not employed, so I find it more comfortable to stay at home.
Despite that, I've been watching some videos about cleaning and organizing household items. I started watching them to improve my English and learn how to tidy up my room. It's actually quite intriguing to see the dramatic transformation that comes from cleaning a room.